Trickling on the stone of a thickened glow,
I accumulate my conscience, as a true, solid closing
My resident of silence is definitely sealed to the temptations of my welcome r's, relief
My disobedient memory within reckless living, is a false sighting to my thoughts
I make a shimmer upon my hardened granite, as I blissfully reclaim,
the aromas of my fantasy
My presence of a scented rose, has decorated my reasons in dew
The hopeful petals, engrossing me in the touching of days in my own wonderland
Their schemes are full of insanity, and I am constantly pulled within their diet
To remain would be a blessing of false possibilities and leaving would be the better achievement. Any remorse would be dealt with... accordingly...
Fin
11-21-96
I accumulate my conscience, as a true, solid closing
My resident of silence is definitely sealed to the temptations of my welcome r's, relief
My disobedient memory within reckless living, is a false sighting to my thoughts
I make a shimmer upon my hardened granite, as I blissfully reclaim,
the aromas of my fantasy
My presence of a scented rose, has decorated my reasons in dew
The hopeful petals, engrossing me in the touching of days in my own wonderland
Their schemes are full of insanity, and I am constantly pulled within their diet
To remain would be a blessing of false possibilities and leaving would be the better achievement. Any remorse would be dealt with... accordingly...
Fin
11-21-96
3 comments:
I love it... "disobedient in reckless living", a classic visual of confusion and chaos is represented well just in that line alone. This is deeper poetry, that which does not rhyme thank goodness and has a subtle message but full of classic imagery. Hi btw I discovered you on your usage of VINEFIRE which is a special Beta fave project of mine these days. Look at the great people I am meeting via VINEFIRE ! Thank you for being a real contributor of quality material.
sharing the light and when you get a moment might you check out my page . . .
miss erica hidvegi
Wow! You have great poetry and art! Funny that I saw you on EasyHits...
I see you do not have adgitize nor entrecard. It would help you promote your blog. And with your talent, you deserve a huge audience!
I'd like to invite you to visit my blog and you can sign up from there. Also, if you like you can follow me and I will follow you. Plus! You get a linky love in a post!
;-)
~Daisy
http://inlovewithdaisies.blogspot.com/
Thank you both for your compliments on my poetry and art! I would enjoy linking our sites, however, I don't know how to do that. . .sigh :-( I am not that computer savvy (took me months to put this together smile) and after my computer fried, I lost everything, Good thing I emailed a few of my drawings and poems to myself.
Thank you again, and let me know how to link our sites ;-) I will be checking out your sites just as soon as I finish this. Now if I could only earn as well as I write and draw, this would be a big plus! Thank you again.
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